A nice first submission, but you're using a lot of default instruments/samples. Was this made using fruityloops? It sounds like it. Anyhow, I'd recommend you experiment with new drum/synth samples... you can usually find free packs to download from different sites. It'll help so your songs don't sound so defaultish. Aside from that, it's a nice arrangement, but I'd stay away from the multiple open hi-hat hits in the song, it just sounds cheesy.
Another redeeming quality is that the song loops pretty well.
I like this tune. Very synthpop kind of feel. You should give the band 'Mesh' a listen, I think you'd like them. This is a good submission, I look forward to future submissions.
Hey, thanks for the very kind words. Mesh is one of my bigger influences and I am actually trying to get signed to their same label right now. I will be putting more tracks soon, so keep an ear out. Thanks again.
This is definitely nice and light airy material. It's a laid back track, and I can definitely see some flash artists using it for soft background music. Overall a good effort.
That's some really neat stuff. Keep up the good work! :)
I think the song sounds cooler sped up. Hahaha. You should work with that. Mistakes are meant to happen this way. When the second high guitar riff comes in, you should add a few muted guitar slaps... using the guitar as a slap bass almost... that'd add a little bit more atmosphere. Love the track sped up though. :)
I think this song could use a light break beat... when the main soft synth comes in, it could use a soft guitar riff that would etch its way in slowly... If you want to develop this, that is. Good start though. :) Trying to make sure all your songs have comments. :)
you can see it coming...
The opening drags a bit, you should cut that a little bit shorter... and you almost can tell what kind of a drum beat is going to come in... aside from that, it's a nice laid back track. Good work. :)
Telephon Tel Aviv...
This reminds me a lot of Telephon Tel Aviv... so much so that I need to listen to some of it tonight when I get home. :)
fives across the board...
This doesn't really show a lot of effort on your part. I hear fruityloops all over this. The "PLUCK" plugin... the packaged drums (handclaps, etc.)... it feels like very little of this was customized. You need to think out of the box. You have to create your own samples...
Very loopable. Don't have too much to add for improvement - I'd like the drums to be equalized a little bit more... a little louder. Aside from that, nice and flawless.
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